Sunday, November 17, 2013

Essay #2

Although they are teaching different subjects, teaching eras apart, and teaching a different student population, Mr. Keating and Ms. Neuhauser, my high school photography teacher, have two very similar teaching styles. The most apparent commonality both teachers share with one another is their ability to encourage students to explore their imagination through their eccentric personalities so the student would succeed. If the students did not want to push themselves in the subject, Mr. Keating and Ms. Neuhauser would shove them out of their comfort zone. Another striking similarity is how other teachers would complain about the loudness both Mr. Keating’s class and Ms. Neuhauser’s class.. One difference between the two teachers would be that Mr. Keating did not have any apparent favorites. On the other hand Ms. Neuhauser saw a great potential in a few and took a special interest in those student’s success. In this paper I will argue that Mr. Keating and Ms. Neuhauser are very similar teachers, despite small differences.
            Encouragement is a key similarity between Mr. Keating and Ms. Neuhauser. Both teachers taught a class not common to most students. Mr. Keating taught a class that did not put much stock in learning poetry; Ms. Neuhauser taught photography, which at my high school was a required art requirement for those who did not want to do drawing or painting. However, both teachers were able to get their students excited about the material by being excited themselves about the subjects. By being so passionate about English and Photography, Mr. Keating and Ms. Neuhauser were able to draw out passions in the students. Mr. Keating realized his students had been constantly under control of their parents, and of society’s expectations. He asked his students, “What will your verse be?” meaning, what will your mark on the world be? By introducing his student to a new way of thinking through poetry, Mr. Keating was able to get his students interested in poetry. For a different subject, Ms. Neuhauser always encouraged us to look at it from a different angle. Now, for photography, her meaning was literal. She wanted us look at everyday items from a different angle through the camera. For one assignment she did not want me to look through the camera when I took the picture, and I could not take a picture at eye level. I always wanted to perfectly compose each image and have each shot be meticulous. By having me do this assignment my comfort sound expanded in terms of what photography was interesting to me.  It also caught my fascination with photography; I realized that each photograph I take should not be perfect, and that beauty sometimes comes from the imperfect.
            If students were not able to get out of their comfort zone themselves both Mr. Keating and Ms. Neuhauser would push their students out of it. Both teachers did this by having students present their work in front of their peers. With poetry and photography there is no right or wrong answer, therefore there should be no shame in presenting one’s work. In Mr. Keating’s class, Todd was painfully shy when it was his turn to recite his poem. When Mr. Keating drew a poem out of Todd, Todd was able to become success in the class. Ms. Neuhauser knew that if the students had to present our photography in front of the class, the pressure of the presentation would drive us to do better work than if we had not had to show anyone. She used peer pressure to her advantage: by doing showings in front of peers and peer critiques, the students were pushed to work harder, and usually pushed to produce better quality work.
            A specific similarity between Mr. Keating and Ms. Neuhauser would be how other teachers complained about noise when their classes were outside. Mr. Keating took his class outside to demonstrate the effect of conformity. Mr. Nolan looked upon the class with annoyance, and disgust at Mr. Keating’s teaching, when he noticed the class outside. Earlier on in the movie Mr. Nolan told Mr. Keating that he should not be encouraging students to become artists; Mr. Keating said he is teaching his students to be free thinkers. Mr. Nolan never understood why Mr. Keating had certain teaching methods, so later on in the movie Mr. Nolan gets Mr. Keating fired. For photography class, Ms. Neuhauser took the class outside frequently to explore new techniques, or to capture the light that was shining just perfectly. Other teachers complained frequently that they were trying to teach their subject while they saw other students walking around campus, and heard the clicking of a shutter. Ms. Neuhauser always said shoot as much as we could, and if that meant taking photographs during class, then that is what it took.
            The only difference I found when comparing the two teachers was that Ms. Neuhauser sometimes picked favorites to give special instructions to, while Mr. Keating seemingly had no favorites. One could argue that the Dead Poets Society was a group made up on Mr. Keating’s favorites, but that group sought out the Dead Poets Society. Also, we have no information on what Mr. Keating’s relationship with the other students were like. At the end of the movie when Mr. Keating was leaving, most of the class stood up in support of him, not just the Dead Poets Society. This suggests Mr. Keating might have had just as good of relationships with the other students as he had with the members of the Dead Poets Society. Having been in four of Ms. Neuhauser’s photography classes I noticed that she liked the students who had more passion for photography. Ms. Neuhauser gave these students more freedoms, such as having more time outside (especially when other teachers had been complaining recently), or allowing these students to stay in her classroom even after she left for the day.  I do not know if this discouraged the other students, because her favorites were typically the ones who enjoyed her class the most. Although she had her favorites, Ms. Neuhauser was always equally supportive of every single student, and wanted the entire class to succeed.
            Despite favoritism, Mr. Keating and Ms. Neuhauser are greatly similar teachers. Both are eccentrically passionate about their subjects, and in turn excite their students to learn more about the subjects. I have found that if I have a teacher who is passionate about their subject I will end up loving the subject as well. If every teacher were as devoted to teaching their subject as Mr. Keating and Ms. Neuhauser were, I believe students would love school so much more, because their excitement allowed students to become passionate about a subject.